![]() ![]() For example, let’s look at the opening paragraph of the first chapter: I find myself thinking of ways the story could have been made more interesting. No conversations show up in those pages, just paragraphs of information dumping. ![]() I am not a reader who pays close attention to the technical aspects of a story, so it is pretty telling when the first thing I notice about this story is that the first five pages of this story are all telling and no showing. But will Matt’s issues tear them apart for good? He’s gorgeous, understanding, sensible, and is more than happy to hold his pee-pee for him when nature calls. There is light at the end of the tunnel when James Hayden shows up to become his nurse. He’s grouchy, sullen, et cetera, and all those scary female nurses only want to shag him. Now, he needs to undergo therapy to regain control of his movement. Our hero, Matt Harmon, nearly died in a car accident. Rescue Me is the rainbow version of a plot that should be familiar to readers of romance. ![]()
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